dexter
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Posted 2016-11-12 15:46
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| give my video a go please :) https://youtu.be/aswTKLoG9aE | |
primal_r
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Posted 2016-11-13 20:42
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Nice vid. It was powerful and emotional until the thing with the bubbly. Then after that it lost a bit of it's appeal; due to the "main character" no longer evoking empathy. |
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dexter
Score: 4105826 Posts: 40 Reputation: +3 Joined: 2014-12-18 |
Posted 2016-11-15 16:15
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thanks for the feedback, it all helps, I've had another go :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbl2O_xLNNo |